From 530f22cd30b7e757abe04ac3287628a94e532bb6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Deyton Sehn Date: Fri, 1 Jun 2018 15:13:47 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Remove language assuming knowledge of GitHub OAuth The old wording made it sound like everyone has seen this modal before. Beginners may be discouraged if this is the first time they've come across the GitHub authorization modal. My thoughts are this is similar to what is described here: https://css-tricks.com/words-avoid-educational-writing/#article-header-id-6 --- content/en/hosting-and-deployment/hosting-on-netlify.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/content/en/hosting-and-deployment/hosting-on-netlify.md b/content/en/hosting-and-deployment/hosting-on-netlify.md index fca639fac..f2820a8de 100644 --- a/content/en/hosting-and-deployment/hosting-on-netlify.md +++ b/content/en/hosting-and-deployment/hosting-on-netlify.md @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ The following examples use GitHub, but other git providers will follow a similar ![Screenshot of the homepage for app.netlify.com, containing links to the most popular hosted git solutions.](/images/hosting-and-deployment/hosting-on-netlify/netlify-signup.jpg) -Selecting GitHub will bring up a typical modal you've seen through other application that use GitHub for authentication. Select "Authorize application." +Selecting GitHub will bring up an authorization modal for authentication. Select "Authorize application." ![Screenshot of the authorization popup for Netlify and GitHub.](/images/hosting-and-deployment/hosting-on-netlify/netlify-first-authorize.jpg)