From 491359a3381567d8a1fe31b273f4c97838d6a4dd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: rupert THURNER <rupert.thurner@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 18 Dec 2013 04:48:14 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] kiwix android: extend help with wikipedia bookshelf (en). fix
 some typos in the page as well.

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 res/raw/welcome.html | 14 ++++++--------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/res/raw/welcome.html b/res/raw/welcome.html
index be4d7e132..7fe619766 100644
--- a/res/raw/welcome.html
+++ b/res/raw/welcome.html
@@ -15,12 +15,10 @@
 <div id="content-wrapper">
 
 <section id="step1">
-	<h2><span>1.</span> Download a Content</h2>
-	<p><strong>Kiwix</strong> is an Offline Content Reader, perfectly tailored for Wikipedia. Enjoying Kiwix is just <strong>2 steps</strong> away.</p>
-	<p>Why don't you try our Wikipedia Demo file?</p>
+	<h2><span>1.</span> Download Offline Files</h2>
+	<p><strong>Kiwix</strong> allows to read websites like Wikipedia off-line. Try our 2.4MB Wikipedia demo file containing a few articles about singer <em>Ray Charles</em> from the English Wikipedia:</p>
 	<a class="button" href="http://download.kiwix.org/zim/0.9/wikipedia_en_ray_charles_03_2013.zim">Ray-Charles-Demo.zim</a>
-	<p>It's a 2.4MB ZIM containing a few articles about singer <em>Ray Charles</em> from the English Wikipedia.</p>
-	<p>It's just a sample! Browse <a href="http://kiwix.org/m/">kiwix.org</a> and the <a href="content://org.kiwix.ui/gotohelp">Help</a> to download other contents; like Wikipedia.</p>
+	<p>Offline content is available at <a href="http://kiwix.org/m/">kiwix.org</a> or the <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Bookshelf">Wikipedia bookshelf</a>. You can create your own books in Wikipedia, refer to the <a href="content://org.kiwix.ui/gotohelp">help</a> for further details.</p>
 	<div class="alert alert-info"><strong>Warning!</strong> This download will take place in your browser. Don't forget to come back to Kiwix once download is complete!</div>
 </section>
 
@@ -31,9 +29,9 @@
 </section>
 
 <section id="step3">
-	<h2><span>3.</span> Open the file up-there!</h2>
-	<p>Click the <span><a href="content://org.kiwix.ui/selectzimfile">Open File</a></span> button in the toolbar up there and select the ZIM file you downloaded. <strong>That's It!</strong></p>
-	<p>Now, Enjoy your content, and take a look at the <a href="content://org.kiwix.ui/gotohelp">Help</a> Page once bored.</p>
+	<h2><span>3.</span> Open the file in Kiwix!</h2>
+	<p>Click the <span><a href="content://org.kiwix.ui/selectzimfile">Open File</a></span> button in the toolbar at the top and select the ZIM file you downloaded. <strong>That's It!</strong></p>
+	<p>Now, enjoy your content, and take a look at the <a href="content://org.kiwix.ui/gotohelp">help</a> page once bored.</p>
 </section>
 
 </div>