[ja][english] rewording

locale/ja/translations.suml

@@ -345,11 +345,12 @@ english:
         - >
             Japanese pronouns are rarely used within natural speech, for the sole reason that
             the subject (I, you, they, etc.) is very often omitted.
-            Referring back to the subject within speech in Japanese makes it sound clunky and repetitive,
+            Referring back to the subject within speech in Japanese
+            can sound very direct as subjects in Japanese are often implied by context,
             and for that reason they aren't often utilised when using the language;
             it would be like if you were to constantly say
             “<strong>They</strong> are my friend, <strong>they</strong> live close to me, <strong>their</strong> name is...”,
-            it just sounds unnatural to listen to.
+            it sounds unnatural.
             However, there are some cases in which third-person pronouns are used, such as referring
             to a person or thing that is absent from the situation, or for changing the subject of the conversation.